Not a bad track. A little too polished for my taste.

It does seem a tad bit too 'radio friendly' to me too, but hopefully that is just because it is the 'radio mix'. I'd be interested to hear an extended mix or a remix as they might have more substance (not so homogenized).

Cheddar. This is rubbish.

First off duke, loose the poodle.
LOSE IT!
You will get more chicks without it.
I know that is why you are singing isnt it? For the tang?
Get some better production kid, you could have potential.
Voice is'nt flat, but that beat is beyond bad in a bad way.

i just got on whitelable so i diggin in the crates...
tune sound good i'll run it..
keep them commin
Bless

not my cup of tea